Nowadays, the common difficulties that we face are heavy traffic and associated pollution problems. Most of metro cities in India are affected by traffic, primarily due to increase in two wheelers and four wheelers. In my below essay, I partially agree how government can take steps to avoid heavy traffic and I partially disagree that citizen do have ownership in reducing the city pollution.
Firstly, I partially agree that government has the hectic responsibility to address the traffic concerns of the common public. Traffic Policemen should be deployed in places of heavy traffic and divert them to another route based on control room instruction. Alternately, they can route the traffic to go on oneway in particular area to avoid major traffic. Additionally, government can increase the price of petrol/diesel and reduce the price of public transport. Consequently, people attention would be diverted to public transport like bus,train, metro. Furthermore, bus/train ticket prices can be given discount if travelled regularly on weekly or monthly basis.
In contrast, I also disagree that as citizens of india, People are more responsible to reduce the pollution levels by using alternative ways of travel. Citizen should follow the law enforced for traffic rules and attend more seminar and campaign to create self awareness. Car pooling reduces usage of cars by individuals . Also, Persons travelling by car can stop the engine when waiting in traffic signal. For places of less distance, people can commute by walk or cycle so that gas emission from vehicles can be reduced to major extent.
In conlusion, clapping both hands creates more noise, hence I agree that government should take more stringent laws and enforce them so that its not overriden and traffic is reduced. Joint effort of citizens are also highly recommended for reduction of pollution. Every individual is responsible for the emission from their vehicle and has to avoid pollution by following government laws related to traffic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , train
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, as to, in contrast, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34905660377 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83965478742 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1642655898 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.058823529 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270076289259 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848131171951 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533812181627 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165790681659 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158599485308 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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