Friendships are considered to be the most important aspect of your entire life. There are different opinions about these relationships. Some people prefer having a lot of friends for a short period of time while others prefer having a small number of friends for a long time. Both have positive and negative aspects. However, I personally believe that the ability to make friends permanent is weighed better than being sociable. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, old-friends can support people during difficult situations in their lives. Giving advice, they can help improve some circumstances because people may tell them about their situation by trusting them. By doing this, people can solve problems since there is enough confidence in having a really difficult conversation. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I had some problems at school since I had problems in my relationship with my girlfriend, therefore my performance was a little complicated. Some of my professors used to tell me that I had to solve this problem in order to focus better in class. The problem was much more complicated than my professors though. In order to solve this issue, I had a serious conservation with one of my best friends. He could give me a great advice which was to break up with my girlfriend because according to him education is more important than a relationship. By following his suggestion, I could improve my performance not only in class but also at home.
Secondly, most of the activities are better enjoyed by performing them with your old friends. The longer relationships are the better connection among friends. Having lived different situations with them, people share most preferences which involve enjoying activities more efficiently. For instance, when I was a child, I made some friends that despite the fact that I had to move to another city due to my father’s job, these relationships are still flourishing. Every single day we have a video chat which provides us with more trust and when I go to visit them, we develop some activities that all we enjoy such as paintball or bowling. In other words, although social skills are important, I consider that having some old-friends is the best way to share moments.
In conclusion, I strongly think that having friends for a long time bring about some benefits in terms of trust and enjoyment.
Friendships are considered to be the most important aspect of your entire life. There are different opinions about these relationships. Some people prefer having a lot of friends for a short period of time while others prefer having a small number of friends for a long time. Both have positive and negative aspects. However, I personally believe that the ability to make friends permanent is weighed better than being sociable. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, old-friends can support people during difficult situations in their lives. Giving advice, they can help improve some circumstances because people may tell them about their situation by trusting them. By doing this, people can solve problems since there is enough confidence in having a really difficult conversation. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I had some problems at school since I had problems in my relationship with my girlfriend, therefore my performance was a little complicated. Some of my professors used to tell me that I had to solve this problem in order to focus better in class. The problem was much more complicated than my professors though. In order to solve this issue, I had a serious conservation with one of my best friends. He could give me a great advice which was to break up with my girlfriend because according to him education is more important than a relationship. By following his suggestion, I could improve my performance not only in class but also at home.
Secondly, most of the activities are better enjoyed by performing them with your old friends. The longer relationships are the better connection among friends. Having lived different situations with them, people share most preferences which involve enjoying activities more efficiently. For instance, when I was a child, I made some friends that despite the fact that I had to move to another city due to my father’s job, these relationships are still flourishing. Every single day we have a video chat which provides us with more trust and when I go to visit them, we develop some activities that all we enjoy such as paintball or bowling. In other words, although social skills are important, I consider that having some old-friends is the best way to share moments.
In conclusion, I strongly think that having friends for a long time bring about some benefits in terms of trust and enjoyment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...fer having a lot of friends for a short period of time while others prefer having a small numb...
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Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...riod of time while others prefer having a small number of friends for a long time. Both have posi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87041375901 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7324202455 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3913043478 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47826086957 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348204993457 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102346064403 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14053008576 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270758694161 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231060459481 0.0645574589148 358% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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