You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter
- say where you think you left the papers
- explain why they are so important
- tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently attended a business meeting at your prestigious hotel and writing to inform you about some essential documents, which I must have forgotten at your hotel.
As I can vividly remember, I must have placed these documents on table in conference room. In order to quickly identify, a sealed white envelope with the company logo(ciena) on the right bottom of the envelope must be there.
I am afraid that It is a confidential information of the company and consists of consolidated data about the project. I am worried to lose my job in case the papers get misplaced.
I shall be highly obliged to you If you would check the conference room personally and keep these documents safe with you. Please call me at 9888721957 to arrange a mutually convenient time to collect the documents.
I look forward to receiving a call from you.
Yours faithfully.
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ob in case the papers get misplaced. I shall be highly obliged to you If you w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8961038961 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81524773949 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5037381872 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290962008019 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858644207037 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111931943562 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151782724948 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126476576041 0.0580467560999 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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