You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.Write a letter to your boss. In your letter:•Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need•Explain how you keep up to date while you are away•Suggest ho

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You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.
Write a letter to your boss. In your letter:
• Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need
• Explain how you keep up to date while you are away
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Murthy,
I request you to grant me a leave to attend the marriage ceremony of my brother which is scheduled on 31st December 2018 in California. To arrange for the wedding, I will have to be there at least 5 weeks before the marriage date. Therefore, I have applied for five weeks of leave starting from 25th November 2018 to 1st January 2019.

I will be frequently checking my emails to keep abreast of all the happenings in the project. On top of it, I have I have also scheduled a weekly call with all my colleagues to know the status of the deliverables and to answer their query.

Moreover, I have trained Amit on all aspects of work which were carried out by me. During my absence, he will perform my role of engaging the customers. In addition to it, I have also documented the details of pending task which can be used as a guide while I am away.

Looking forward to a positive reply from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Adam Smith.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is scheduled on 31st December 2018 in California. To arrange for the weddin...
^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'I have'.
Suggestion: I have
...appenings in the project. On top of it, I have I have also scheduled a weekly call with all m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, at least, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48275862069 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53697716541 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626436781609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9222155348 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14040267941 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585156369097 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499252012543 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084520238845 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657119214 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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