You read an advertisement from local newspaper about a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you went to buy the goods you wanted, you found the sale had ended.
Dear Sir,
I read in a local newspaper about the 50% discount offered by your shop on Clothing Items which is located on the Pedder Road. The advertisement clearly mentioned that the Discount will end on 31/10/2018. So, I decided to the visit the shop as the offer appeared extremely attractive to me.
However, when I reached the shop on 31.10.2018 in the evening at 5 PM, I was told by your staff that the discount has been discontinued several days ago. On questioning the manager about the Advertisement, he said that it could be a mistake and he was not aware of it.
This episode has left me feeling disappointed and cheated and therefore I demand to be compensated for the hardship which I faced. I want you to pay me the amount of Rs 600 which I paid for the cab to visit your shop. Additionally, I want you to sell the clothes at a discounted price to me when I visit your store next time.
I hope you will honour my demand and also ensure that such a blunder is not committed again.
Yours Faithfully,
Nilesh J Pandey
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48167539267 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72451597691 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.887839698 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211155733454 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745552896274 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587851580589 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117056823169 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231841887366 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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