You recently saw an advertisement in a local newspaper regarding some vacancies in a local departmental store/supermarket.
Write a letter to the recruiting officer. In your letter
- The post for which you are applying for
- Give details about your experience
- Why you want to get this job.
Dear Sir,
I am across a job opening for Stores Manager in your departmental store from an advertisement posted in a local newspaper. I am writing this letter to apply for the same.
I am an MBA with specialization in Retail Management with 8 years of experience working as an assistant stores manager in DMART. My role demanded to accurately predict the demand and ensure that the products are ordered well in advance. In addition to it, I was also involved in Quality Check for a brief amount of time. Because of this, I have gained huge exposure in managing retail outlets with considerable efficiency.
Since I am working in a local departmental store with no branches, the scope for learning and development is limited. Hence, I am applying in your store as it is multinational stores and it will give me new learning opportunities and to further improve my skills and experience.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Nilesh J Pandey
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g this letter to apply for the same. I am an MBA with specialization in Retail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92168674699 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02674127127 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632530120482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8192356616 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266778123582 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100413329932 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805995562992 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162896348358 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113072862505 0.0580467560999 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.