You have rented a car for few day from an agency. However, there are some problems with car.
Tell him/her the problen of the car.
What you want the agency to do now
How you feel about the problem.
Dear Sir,
My name is Nilesh Pandey. I had rented a Toyota Innova from you Yesterday for a period of 5 days. The registration number is MH1234. I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention to major problems in the car which I noticed while driving it to Pune.
First, the fuel indicator in the car does not work. Due to this, it becomes extremely difficult to know when the car will run out of fuel and could possibly lead us stranded on the road. Second, the cooling system on the back seat is not working which is making the passengers highly uncomfortable in this scorching heat.
When I first came to see the car, these issues were not highlighted to me, I was promised a hassle free drive. However, this has not come to be. I will be in Pune for 1 more day. During this time, I would like to replace the car at your Pune branch. I want you to ensure that this is done without any inconvenience.
I feel extremely disappointed that a reputed company like yours could lend a defective car to its customers.
Looking forward to immediate action.
Yours Faithfully
Nilesh J Pandey
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 143, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...w when the car will run out of fuel and could possibly lead us stranded on the road. Second, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5671641791 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5635170205 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7450928793 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211652498304 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603086253738 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520437580065 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101215959357 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644632789372 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.