You have recently come back from an overseas holiday. An employee at the airport helped you when you were in trouble.
Write a letter to the airport manager. In your letter
- Describe your problem
- How the employee helped you
- Tell the manager to give a reward to that employee.
Dear Sir,
Last week, I came back from a vacation in England. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to Mr David Hobson, an employee at your Heathrow airport terminal 2, for helping me in finding my Cabin luggage.
I checked in at Terminal 1 and took the airport metro to go to Terminal 2, as my flight was departing from there. However, upon reaching there I realized that I forgot my bag in the metro. To add to it, only 26 minutes were left for the flight to depart.
I immediately contacted the airport help desk and explained my problem. They assigned Mr David to help me out. He immediately called the metro and got the bag located. However, there was no time left to get the bag to me. He assured me that he will arrange to send the bag in the next flight and requested me to board the flight.
As promised by him, the bag was delivered to me the next day. This incident had made me think that would it not be inspiring for the airport staff to be rewarded for such good work by the management. I request you to reciprocate his good behaviour with some kind of reward so that he keeps serving the travellers better
Yours faithfully,
Neil Nitin Mukesh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... requested me to board the flight. As promised by him, the bag was delivere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41363636364 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43813961729 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1915531766 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172205386389 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523578503661 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604096614152 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997243780117 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063456455897 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.