Some people think that hardworking and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factor are important. Discuss both sides and what is your opinion.
A hotly debatable issue whether gain success in life just needed to diligent and perseverance rather than financial and family support even very significant for better life. I opine that honesty and determination this both quality very important for success and discuss both point of view.
On the one hand, in today era money plays part and parcel role in each individuals life owing to without financial support they never achieve success in life. Firstly, in competitive era every person seek to high salary package job, luxurious cars and house and fame it is not ease getting. At beginning they need to strong link in society, with more importantly they need to family and friends supports who also stand first in difficulty time. For instance, acknowledge one ordinary people who want start to own bussiness because they think as worker life very boring and stressful for this reason their wants to change lifestyles but, they are very creative and talent. In contrast, financial faye very poor so for that always scared take it risk in life and scarified with employer life.
On the other hand, who people are more hardworking and determination they never depend on others person and when faced trapper in life they never feel scare than along with bravery to solve the problem. Secondly, now in this era minority of individual who take decision very descent and correct because they always believe in diligent with which they achieve success in life. This people never believe in loss for this reason always again and again to doing practice then, in the one day they achieve the life ambition.
In conclusion, I pen down to say that in today era hardworking and determination which are two best key factor for achieve life ambition, however, there is no any doubt money and society support even the keep similar importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...oney plays part and parcel role in each individuals life owing to without financial support...
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Line 2, column 744, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'risks'?
Suggestion: risks
... poor so for that always scared take it risk in life and scarified with employer lif...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... and determination they never depend on others person and when faced trapper in life t...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ith which they achieve success in life. This people never believe in loss for this r...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'factor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'factors'.
Suggestion: factors
...nd determination which are two best key factor for achieve life ambition, however, the...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...chieve life ambition, however, there is no any doubt money and society support eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94174757282 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43766024107 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7943543818 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.818181818 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220805876945 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870300100471 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613093526215 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141525741392 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266410424702 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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