Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown.
The column chart illustrates the information about the comparison of how many male and female to doing unpaid work.
A quick look on graph is enough to make it clear that married women are preferred more than married men, over given period of time.
To commence with, in the first category of without children inside the figure for the engaged female have showed to interest more for unpaid work as compared to married men at 30 and 20, respectively. Surprisingly, in the next category of with 1-2 children into the coupled women have fascinated more to doing work without salary with dramatically increased to 55 but, the figure for the engaged men are slightly decreased to under twenty.
Moving further, in the third category of with 3 plus pupils, where the figure for the coupled women reached to peak point at 58 rather than the number of married male revealed to the downward trend which accounted for 18.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...erred more than married men, over given period of time. To commence with, in the first catego...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79746835443 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46348107038 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1243320565 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.6 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208741282648 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108897530763 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448818580615 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106328876159 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520301518283 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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