some people suggest higher education should be funded by the government, while others think students should pay the course fees themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many hold the view that government has the duty of funding higher education. However, there is a body of opinion which claims that students should pay their course fees by themselves. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that free higher education can make universities more accessible to students, since it can allow those good students from poor families to receive further education. In addition, free education can boost national employment. To be specific, college education is to help students gain employment skills, such as professional knowledge and social skills When more students study at college, there will be more qualified graduates who will find jobs easily in the future.
On the other hand, however, paying the tuition fees by the students can reduce the economic stress on the government, which can invest more funds in other important aspects, such as medical care and environment protection. Moreover, students can enjoy better education service, for schools may have more money when students pay for their courses. This increased revenue can be used to improve education quality, including hiring excellent teachers and purchasing state-of-the-art facilities.
To sum up, there is no doubt that governments paying the fees allows more students to have access to universities and boost country's employment. At the same time, however, students paying the fee reduces government's economic burden and have opportunities to enjoy better education service. In the final analysis, therefore, one can safely conclude that students should pay course fees by themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
Nowadays, many hold the view that government has the duty o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83806282378 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580769230769 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4007495938 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297281704173 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11603438736 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759012403506 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196846332209 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764200048252 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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