Some people think that once a person becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. Do you agree with this statement.
Nowadays, there are plenty of reason that people are choose to criminal than peaceful life. I totally disagree with this statement owing to every person think not similar, with they well known that criminal life very dangerous as compare to descent.
On the one hand, there are numerous stunning cause that why people not again to doing crime. Firstly, in today era governments made a strictly some rules and regulations which are more effective against criminals and inhabitants well known if they by chance to doing crime then their remain completely life always feel guilty. Moreover, when a person went to jail then, there they always realize by own mistake and learn to truly life lesson, done to promised themselves that never repeat the crime. For instance, now in this era every persons seeks to respectful life neither they become famous as criminal and all society scared for this reason after from one mistake it is significantly that their family, friends and society to be it together and should encourage for better and healthy life.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that when individual face more poverty and compulsion in life then they step out take action to have a criminal life. Secondly, majority of culprit think that crime as profession and source of earn money and respect so for that they never left this bad job than they always work with bad company as team members. Their in this life very ordinary to steal like car, bike and other criminal activities.
In conclusion, I believe that there are many advantages If people opt to better life than culprit such as gain fame and also family support, however, who people more prefer crime as profession then in life face more nuisances in daily routine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8813559322 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34723183152 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3475315064 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151589136767 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655597543714 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436857324529 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097941573779 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460274472513 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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