Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development, however, others thinks social value is lost as a result. Do you think advantages of economics development outweigh the disadvantages.
A hotly debatable issue today relates to that if economic development could be improve then might be along with has advanced the lifestyle of people. But, other individual believe that thus bad worst impact on society. I opine that there are many benefits of strong financial condition outweigh drawbacks.
On the one hand, now in this era all people mentally, healthy along with as financial have even want to strong. Firstly, in compatible world majority of nations aim that their people or inhabitants achieve high education then more opportunities to live better lifestyle in upcoming year. Moreover, they also contribute to improve the society income, with more motivates to pay the taxes and donate money in charitable. For instance, in native of U.S.A around 80% people live to luxurious lifestyle owing to there individual are getting to sum up income and also pay the taxes.
On the other hand, there is no any doubt that in modern era advance lifestyle along with people forget the tradition and culture. Secondly, in society who individual are very affluent they forget the difference between rich and poor people for this reason they never give to respect and their along with always use the abuse words with which in community expand to the inequality so for that if economic enable to stable then they always show off the status in families and relatives. In additionally, if all society become to strongly financial then most individual attract towards fashion and always driving through personal transport with which they bicycle and walk to understand only waste of time and loss the value of tradition and culture.
In conclusion, I pen down to say that there are more beneficial of economics development has brought some advantages like people become to more educate and show the interest in donate the money to charitable organization, however, expanded to inequality, jealously and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
...althy along with as financial have even want to strong. Firstly, in compatible world...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...ritable. For instance, in native of U.S.A around 80% people live to luxurious lif...
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Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...ritable. For instance, in native of U.S.A around 80% people live to luxurious lif...
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Line 3, column 29, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...the taxes. On the other hand, there is no any doubt that in modern era advance li...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a individual'.
Suggestion: who is a individual
...ition and culture. Secondly, in society who individual are very affluent they forget the diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0923566879 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63206301024 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2833669855 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.363636364 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111404598882 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418759494912 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267104991764 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744061649407 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269657443685 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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