Although some believe that it is a responsibility of the people in a society to save plant and animal species despite the expense in effort, time , and financial or monetory well being, other believe that there is not need to save plant and animal species in case they require a greater cost in money jobs. As human beings totally reliable on plants and animals, if they would get extinct, it will not be possible to survive human beings without plant and animals. Our whole ecosystem is dependent upon plants and animals and also recycle balance. I agree with former one which states that human should apply efforts to save plant and animal species in any case irrespective of money and time.
Firstly, human being is reliable utterly on plants and animals. Plants release important by products such as oxygen gas , fruits, resins, wood , etc. The most significant contribution of plants is to raining. Plants causes rain, rain causes plants and plants got consumed by human beings. By correlation and causality we can predict that to survive human beings plant’s survival is must. Also, daily we consume milk from various different type of animals. If animals reach to an extinction, how one would consume milk. Although some scientists developed artificial milk, but it also require contribution from animals and plants. So, for daily physiological needs, human beings should apply his efforts to save plant and animal species irrespective of time and money.
However, natural calamity also cause perdition of plant and animal species. Natural calamities such as floods due to excessive rain and thundering, tsunami, wreaking cyclones,etc causes the degradation of plant and animal species in bulk amount. How a human being can prevent a natural calamity? It is not possible to prevent natural calamity despite of money and time. But by investment of money to make such a equipment which raises alarm before natural calamity will definitely can prevent degradation of animals, perhaps plants too.
In conclusion, in today’s fast growing world, human beings are busy in developing technology but with that in parallel approach it is also important to save our natural species which include plant and animal. Since the whole ecosystem is dependent upon plants and animals, it will impossible to survive without them. Moreover, to fulfill daily requirements animals and plants have major contribution to the people in a society. So, it is responsibility to save them using well balance utilization of time , money and efforts,too because human is most judicious, intelligent and prudent animal on the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2202.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23040380048 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72204889247 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467933491686 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.6324961285 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.090909091 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31818181818 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284348554836 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843778626357 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946056511126 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18483844205 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109256753889 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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