The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.Line graph: https://imgur.com/a/Eh2mMhu

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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
Line graph: https://imgur.com/a/Eh2mMhu

The line graph above illustrates the amounts of production waste of three business from 2000 to 2015.
Overall, it is clear that the total amounts of waste from company A and B is gradually declines over the years, which contradicts greatly from the inclination of company C. From the lowest starting position in the graph, company C manages to become the highest waste production company in 15 years.
In 2000, company A and B started at 12 tonnes and 8 tonnes of waste produced retrospectively while the number of company C was just over 3 tonnes. Over 5 years, company A experienced a slight declination and drop below 12 tonnes whereas both B and C equally rocketed at the same rate.
For the next 10 years, company A continued to lower its production of waste to under 9 tonnes. After reached its peak in 2005, company B amounts of produced wastes declined drastically and touched the lowest point compare to company A and C. And with the annual increasment over 15 years, company C becomes the biggest producer of waste in 2015.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71566455168 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521978021978 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.4558441227 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.25 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 7.41237113402 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358371435752 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175297622663 0.0766984524023 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502482859825 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222731300722 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424941711159 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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