individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The idea that whereas governments and big companies play a key role in protecting the environment, individuals cannot make anything to improve these issues remains a source of controversy. While I accept that governments and large firms have enough budget and power to solve environmental problems, downsides of this viewpoint cannot be overlooked.
On the one hand, when everyone takes responsibility for the impact which they do on the environment, making a big difference. Take china as an example. If everyone in china saves one piece of paper in everyday, nearly million trees can be saved in one day. Furthermore, traffic congestion which lead to air pollution will decrease if everyone use public transport instead of private car. Therefore, we must realize the power of each person and shoulder our own responsibility.
On the other hand, governments and large corporations play an important role in improving the environment. Regarding the big companies, instead of using materials that endanger the environment, they can use environmentally friendly materials to protect environment. For instance, when manufacturers realized that disposable plastic bags harm the environment, they stopped their production and found eco-friendly replacements such as fabric bags. In terms of the governments, they can introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or hydroelectric power. Besides, the authorities can encourage city citizens to use public transport instead of private car by imposing “green taxes” on drivers.
In conclusion, national governments, large companies and individuals must take responsibility in protecting our planet because of our next generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ne in china saves one piece of paper in everyday, nearly million trees can be saved in o...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... one piece of paper in everyday, nearly million trees can be saved in one day. Furtherm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70229007634 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31706619636 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8398697228 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233695295103 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731450870814 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575677760518 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126043604447 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038529649244 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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