Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should be do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Does u agree or disagree?
it is irrefutable that crime has taken mammoth dimension in global arena. Advocates are of the view that instead of putting the law offenders behind the bars, they should be given skilled trainings and education. I endorse my point of view in favour of aforementioned statement because of innumerable rational reasons which this essay elucidate in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark upon, financial freedom which criminal will acquire is the top-notch concrete logic behind the support of skilled training. when one will obtain the courses in different profession , they can start earning bread and butter for the family and themselves by doing different kind of jobs in society and also, it will save them from indulging in any other type of petty crimes in future. For instance, a recent survey by “law Department” of “Oxford University” reveals that in “London” after using skilled courses for law offenders ,plummet is seen in the law violation by people with criminal background. Additionally, education will broaden their horizon and assist to remove the negativity out of the law offenders mind. when criminals will read about the consequences of the law violation and danger caused by their act, they can self-realize themselves results of committing crime.
Furthermore, Imparting skill training and education aid the law violater in social life. As a person behind the prison is considered as evil and it is very difficult for the society people to accept him because of the fear of criminal mind in that person. But, if an individual will not go to the prison then this characteristics will not be associated and one can start normal life after doing such type of courses and also, people would adopt them open handedly .For example, in Sweden where people go for discipline training for violating the minor laws can start their normal life after courses. what is more, family of law offender not suffer from the criticism which is caused by the society .
To recapitulate, the aforementioned arguments provides plausible arguments in the favour of skill training and educational courses and it is beneficial for law offender as well as for their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, of course, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27118644068 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97392722694 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9563280696 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106816815935 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360965576961 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405587414425 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594268405183 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399760241416 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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