In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work.
Burgeoning technology and westernization has given the wings to urban area, in contrast, holistic development in villages has taken back seat. Therefore, advocates are of the view that individuals from teaching and medical profession provided services in rural areas while others postulate that there should be freedom to these professional in choosing their work location. This essay intends to elucidate both the aspects before putting forward any opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, youngsters from educations and healthcare sectors should be beneficial for ameliorating the standard of living in villages. As most of the countryside people deprived of rudimentary education, in the lack of knowledge, they are not able to hunt the rewarding job avenues for themselves. Hence, these humankind always perform low-income jobs. Thusly, if young generation provides them higher and quality academics, it support them in raising their ways of life and earning. Additionally, most of the villages dies and also, suffer from chronic diseases because of the shortage of medical services. To justify this, a recent study by “Oxford University” reveals that forty percent people in countryside dies because of cancer as medical treatment are not available. Therefore, fresh graduates from medical field can be a great blessing to rural section.
on the contrary to this, various evidences are cited by men and women towards the freedom of workplaces chore. Firstly, getting education in teaching and medical area is exorbitant and student always borrow money in the form of repayable loans to pay their tuition fee. Thus, doctor and teacher should have flexibility in selecting high salary jobs so that they can gain profit on their investments. Secondly, most of the young minds want to stay near to their hometown in the guidance of their parents as they have nostalgic memories attract to that place and also, wants to support their elderly parents. Last but not the least, in order to excel in medical and teaching field, young graduates required to choose the place of excellent research infrastructure, where they can grow their horizons. Which is possible, if they have given luxury in pursuing their jobs according to their interest of place.
To recapitulate, although countryside requires the assistance of doctors and teachers, yet, in my opinion in order to earn rewarding job profiles as well as to broaden their outlook, they should be given flexibility in selecting their place of working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ding job avenues for themselves. Hence, these humankind always perform low-income jobs. Thusly,...
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Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...s them higher and quality academics, it support them in raising their ways of life and ...
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Suggestion: villages'; village's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2138.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38539042821 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85516567241 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574307304786 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.993840451 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.764705882 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3529411765 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1671458944 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508910996615 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515806103255 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104277791854 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252664451407 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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