You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say
– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I would like to bring to your notice that there is water leakage from the tap in the washroom and kitchen. The problem surfaced last week and has continued since then and has been causing discomfort to me and my family.
The issue is with the washel of both the taps which has gone loose which results in the water leakage, a similar problem is with the kitchen tap which does not close properly and hence results in a lot of water wastage. Due to this walls around the tap are getting damaged and hence this problem requires immediate attention.
Thus I would request you to ask a plumber to pay us a visit on Saturday around 5 pm to fix this issue and ask him to bring additional washels as I suspect this can resolve the issue.
I look forward to immediate attention on this issue from your side.
Yours faithfully
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I would like to...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sults in a lot of water wastage. Due to this walls around the tap are getting damage...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...roblem requires immediate attention. Thus I would request you to ask a plumber to...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sue from your side. Yours faithfully vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49375 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20325575853 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3967897812 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150703936085 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671966760031 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288341369892 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820155381635 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296980042968 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.