In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is the fact that students in many countries appear to have severe problems with their behaviors.This has become a contraversial topicThere are many causes led to this issue.And some solution could be taken to solve it.
To start with, a lot of schools focus more on their quality of education to deal with the examinations.Teachers and educators tend to concentrate on not mental and politeness but teaching knowledge. While there is no exams relevant to the students’behavior,so that this aspect of educating was always neglected. The secondary reason is the lack of assessment systems and punishments.Students who have serious behavioral problems don’t need to worry about being punished,they could do any improper behavior such as cheating,fighting and fling abuses whenever they want.Not only due to the lack of the sense of that they need to respect themselves and others,but also they wouldn’t be limited by some regulations .The last but not the least,Some parents are likely to spoil their children and they hold the idea that teachers should take the whole responsibility of education both in moral and knowledge.gIn reality,education especially in moral need the cooperation of educators and parents.Without the cooperative education,the complete education wouldn’t be effective for students.
There are some solutions could be taken.Schools could add some moral lecturers and exams to the curriculum syllabus.Besides,Some relevant assessment systems could be taken in order to supervise the students ‘ behavior.And some students with serious behavioral problems ought to punished properly.Otherwise,Schools could take action to build up the connections with parents,to be more specific,schools could contact parents periodically or hold meeting to provide opportunities for students , parents and educators to communicate totally.
In conclusion,students’ poor behavior should be thought highly of as soon as possible.The education of knowledge and moral both significant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86734693878 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.12934231676 2.80592935109 147% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.199691861 49.4020404114 496% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.5 106.682146367 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 20.7667163134 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174219975278 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102966046831 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787905062705 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125183039742 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875038111446 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.82 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.8 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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