You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Mike,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. To let you know I will be moving to Australia very soon to pursue my master in business management at the University of Perth. It will be the beginning of a new journey in my life to live and study in a foreign country. I feel so relieved that at least you are there to help and guide me.
The university allows me to work part-time for 20 hours a week. I believe it is a great idea to work in a retail outlet so that I can earn some extra bucks to support myself while I am here in Australia.
The last time we spoke I remember you told me that you worked in a retail giant Walmart as a general manager. I am sure you will have a lot of contacts there. I would really appreciate if you could recommend me in one of Walmarts retail outlets so that I can work there as a part-timer.
I look forward to your reply and seeing you soon.
warm wishes
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at I can work there as a part-timer. I look forward to your reply and seeing y...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...d to your reply and seeing you soon. warm wishes vinshu
^^^^
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seeing you soon. warm wishes vinshu
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, while, at least, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06951871658 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28702017168 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2658319096 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.4166666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297891604341 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107134597948 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716042804883 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182603560935 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665807332765 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.03 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.