The consumption of fules increasing on large scale that effect nature and human. To prevent this, the global team should have take urgent action to assure that, the utilization rate of non renewnable energy resources is decreased by complete nation.
Firstly, it is vital for global team members to take effective move on fule consumption.moreover, make sure that these steps help to reduse use of oil and gas consumption all over the world.because, it become harmfull for environment and nation for instance, their are number of factories around the world that use distinct fossil fuels for manufacturing process or for production, after the completion of process the smoke came out from chimneys and intract with nature and create pollution that become cause for disease..
Secondly, the increasing rate of energy consumption hit economic growth of all nation. in other words, if any nation use more fule apart from set limit, then they face various financial problem and soon they become dependent on other nation for energy resourses.for illustraton, their are distict nation that use umlimited fuels in inappropriate way without caring future genration, in this situation international team should have to take serious move for the prevention of fuel consumption.
In conclusion, more fuel utilization creating problem for world, and it must had to stop by taking effective action by international team members.
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what should i do to improve my writing????????
You will need to put more
You will need to put more content, look:
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted for task II. You only have 223 words.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...event this, the global team should have take urgent action to assure that, the utili...
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... rate of non renewnable energy resources is decreased by complete nation. Fir...
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...wnable energy resources is decreased by complete nation. Firstly, it is vital...
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...sumption all over the world.because, it become harmfull for environment and nation for...
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...or environment and nation for instance, their are number of factories around the worl...
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... pollution that become cause for disease.. Secondly, the increasing rate of en...
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...se.. Secondly, the increasing rate of energy consumption hit economic growth o...
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...nergy consumption hit economic growth of all nation. in other words, if any natio...
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...ion hit economic growth of all nation. in other words, if any nation use more ful...
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...hey become dependent on other nation for energy resourses.for illustraton, their ...
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... for energy resourses.for illustraton, their are distict nation that use umlimited f...
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...ate way without caring future genration, in this situation international team sho...
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...oblem for world, and it must had to stop by taking effective action by internatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5201793722 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00977380577 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600896860987 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.23396407 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.166666667 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1666666667 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142641738047 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069393276564 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464479857402 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877836714197 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04595677667 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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