Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There has been a discussion about the role of individuals of improving the ecosystem. While I believe that the government and large organizations make significant contribution to preventing pollution . However, I also argue that it is the responsibility of every person in society.
On the one hand, it can not denied that the government and large companies have a vital role in solving environment problems. There is the fact that the environmental protection require a huge amount of money which only is tackled by the government. An other point worth talking into account is the big companies are the main reason cause serious pollution by the emission from their factories. So it is generally believe that the situation of environment can improve significant if the pollutant is treated before being release into environment.
On the other hand, individuals also should be responsible in protecting the habitat. By raising the environmental awareness and changing living habit, people can prevent the habitat destruction. For example, using public transportation could decrease the number of private vehicle and leading reduce the exhaust. This brings positive effect on air environment, especially in the big cities. An other way which a person can do to protect the environment is replacing plastic bags with paper bags. Because it is difficult to decomposed the plastic material.
In conclusion, although there are still dissenting opinion about this issue, but it seem to me that both of government and individuals are enable to improve the environment by different solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...replacing plastic bags with paper bags. Because it is difficult to decomposed the plast...
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...enting opinion about this issue, but it seem to me that both of government and indiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38152610442 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11197943438 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.46944817 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24570442805 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694969807093 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525312806764 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128202446105 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364698260541 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.