Countries should spend more money on trains rather than new roads .Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that more money should be spent on trains and not on new roads.This essay agrees with this statement because trains are faster and they are more economic friendly.
Trains are Faster and do have certain merits compared with the Road Transport System,They do not have high traffic and have higher maximum speed.The higher maximum speed of the train helps in reduced Journey times and unlike on road vehicles, Trains are less prone to accidents .As a matter of fact ,Due to very limited traffic on railway tracks,Trains keep up more standard timings as per the Schedule without delay.A research study found that the Passengers who traveled by train saved an average of 45 minutes a day compared with the passengers who traveled by car in San Francisco Metro.
It is a well-known fact that the Trains are more economic friendly as they do not produce much carbon dioxide.Increase in the number of trains reduces the number of cars on the road,which certainly reduces the emissions of carbon dioxide.
The Fall in the emissions of carbon dioxide reduces the global warming ,Besides that It is very good to Passengers as they tend to suffer less from respiratory diseases.For instance,The Carbon dioxide percentage in the air went down by 10 percentage in china after spending more money on trains.
To Conclude,More money should be spent towards trains than new roads because they are more faster ,reliable and are environmental friendly.Trains are also recommended because of reduced travel time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, well, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10040160643 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77443485239 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.427342313 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.0 106.682146367 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.8 20.7667163134 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28979815161 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172326608119 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781848507502 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172326608119 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781848507502 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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