When you studied abroad, you found a new friend that is now asking for your help to find a job in your country that will suits his qualification.
State the job that is available.
Reason why he will be choosen by the owner.
Explain how will he apply for the position.
Dear Jon,
Hi! How are you? I received your letter yesterday and I am more than willing to refer you to one of the best restaurants in our place. In fact, your timing is perfect because last week, one of my colleagues is looking for a chef for their restaurant that can cook a plethora of Asian cuisine.
I am 100% sure that you will love this job. Your passion in cooking is remarkable. The position will suit your experience and of course, I am a living witness that you are a hard-working, nice and talented person. In addition, the baking skills that you have will be an extra point so that the owner will choose you.
To speed up the process, just send your résumé in this email address cookinghiring101@gmail.com. The owner will contact you through Skype. Just prepare to send your important documents and hopefully, after a month or two, your flight details will be available for you to print.
See you soon!
All the best,
Anna Ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jon, Hi! How are you? I received your lette...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can cook a plethora of Asian cuisine. I am 100% sure that you will love this j...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...int so that the owner will choose you. To speed up the process, just send your ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls will be available for you to print. See you soon! All the best, Anna Al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, in addition, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60588235294 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91696505312 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.770304503 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1818181818 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37129362605 0.216113520407 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142895021252 0.0766984524023 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688490124263 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25231112217 0.12726935374 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538040978479 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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