Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet.
How accurate is this statement?
Are there any other bigger threats to mankind?
The greatest threat to livelihood on earth is the greenhouse effect. This statement is not true as the consequences of climate changes would be long-term and scientists will be able to find solutions by then. However, nuclear war is the most dangerous threat to the human race.
The rising levels of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases in the atmosphere is the main reason for the greenhouse effect. This would cause global warming by increasing global temperature that would lead to many problems such as the melting of glaciers, floods and so on. The results of global warming would occur after the span of around 80-100 years before that science would be able to overcome this problem. For example, Elon Musk predicted that after twenty years, 80% of cars on roads would be electric and 10% resource of energy consumption would be solar.
Moreover, nuclear weapons are the most critical threat to our civilization. Many nations are now on the verge of creating more and more fatal bombs and weapons as they can destroy in a fraction of second the whole mankind. That is to say that its results are instantaneous and the most dangerous. Consequently, any nation can use to curb its rivalry kingdom. For example, in the world war two United States used to destroy the Japanese cities Hiroshima and Nagasaki by nuclear weapons. These are also used in present times to end the life of Syrian citizens.
In conclusion, although the rising global temperature is a serious issue, its effects are long-term and technology would be able to resolve this problem by then. The nuclear rockets and bombs are the deadliest to the existence of men and women. It is recommended that the government should ban the production of nuclear weapons by all countries.
- Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 67
- Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both these views and give your 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g global temperature is a serious issue, its effects are long-term and technology...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93602693603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62323489462 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4735817194 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132449580182 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432515741905 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459924660059 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838968374262 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685461941285 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.