The table illustrates how attractive the Ashdown Museum has been throughout the years which are twelve-month periods before and after being refurbished. In addition, the two charts below the table provide the result of researchs of the pleasure of customers at the same time.
Overall, the charts are divided into 5 levels ( no response, very dissatisfied, dissatisfied, satisfied, very satisfied). The proportions of levels had altered significantly from the beginning, except for the rate of no response which had remained the same amount. The number of travelers to the Ashdown Museum has gone up since the redecoration (from 74000 to 92000)
In the first chart, visitors tend to get bored of the museum since the largest percentage is dissatisfied (40%) and 10% of very dissatisfied, but it also has positive answers from the visitors from the 15% of very satisfied and 30% of satisfied. Plus, the neutral users account for the lowest (5%)
The satisfactory of visitors had been improved significantly after the refurbishment as the very satisfied grows 20% higher than before refurbishment, followed by the satisfied (10% increment). The rates of very dissatisfied and satisfied fall dramatically in the second chart: 5% and 25% in order. Moreover, no reponse is steady.
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 78
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
...n the first chart, visitors tend to get bored of the museum since the largest percentage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30541871921 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08057880668 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.3257127013 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 134.625 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220742855808 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876417142368 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726170296489 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137742346941 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833103212438 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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