Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
<p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">In the recent years, the world has seen an unprecedented increase in the number of people learning a foreign language. Some people claim that the reason to learn a foreign language is to travel or work in overseas countries. Conversely, others believe that these are not the only reasons why people should learn a foreign language; I agree with this statement.</p><div style="margin: 10px 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; float: none; text-align: center;"><ins class="adsbygoogle" data-ad-client="ca-pub-7743306663577274" data-ad-slot="6720765683" data-ad-format="auto" data-full-width-responsive="true" data-adsbygoogle-status="done" style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font: inherit; vertical-align: baseline; background: rgb(255, 244, 134); display: block; height: 113px; width: 949px;"><ins id="aswift_1_expand" style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: none; font: inherit; vertical-align: baseline; background: transparent; display: inline-table; height: 113px; position: relative; visibility: visible; width: 949px;"><ins id="aswift_1_anchor" style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: none; font: inherit; vertical-align: baseline; background: transparent; display: block; height: 113px; position: relative; visibility: visible; width: 949px; overflow: hidden;"><iframe width="949" height="113" frameborder="0" marginwidth="0" marginheight="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" allowtransparency="true" scrolling="no" allowfullscreen="true" id="aswift_1" name="aswift_1" style="margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border-width: 0px; border-style: initial; font: inherit; vertical-align: baseline; left: 0px; position: absolute; top: 0px; width: 949px; height: 113px;"></iframe></ins></ins></ins></div><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">It is true that people are keen to learn a foreign language in order to travel or work in a foreign country. To be clear, in the last few years, globalization left a huge impact on the economy of all nations and promoted the growth of multinational companies. Therefore, the rise in the number of people working overseas resulted in an increase in the demand for learning a foreign language. In addition, people need to learn foreign language if they want to travel to overseas countries. For example, if people want to visit a foreign country, they have to learn basic conversations in the local language to communicate with native speakers in daily life.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">Nonetheless, traveling or working is not the only reasons why some people learn foreign languages. People need a foreign language for their studies. Many academic programs make learning a foreign language compulsory. When students learn a foreign language, they can understand and appreciate diverse cultures. People learn new languages for job purposes as well. For instance, many professional jobs in the UK and Australia require IELTS or TOEIC certification. Some learn languages because they love it.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal;">In conclusion, the number of people learning a foreign language has increased dramatically. There are several reasons for this. While some of these are work or travel related, others are purely personal or recreational in nature.</p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4244.0 1615.20841683 263% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 532.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.97744360902 5.12529762239 156% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.64423991293 2.80592935109 237% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407894736842 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1104.3 506.74238477 218% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.60771543086 131% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 567.844751866 49.4020404114 1149% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 282.933333333 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 35.4666666667 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145294554139 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148919513846 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941264215193 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145294554139 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.0946893788 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.35 50.2224549098 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 29.6 12.4159519038 238% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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