Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate discuss both views and give your opinion
We have numerous activities and different lifestyle depending on the hot and cold weather. Some people prefer hot climate for fun and living while others are inclined towards cold climate. In this essay, I am going to discuss both and provide my opinion.
We have a lot of outdoor adventures for the hot weather and that is why people who chooses to explore the new activities and places enjoys it. For example, on a nice day they can go to nearby beach and enjoy the beach volleyball, sun bath and surfing. Moreover, it is easy to adopt to active life style in warm weather where you can go on walk daily, enjoy your gardening and play in the park with your friends and kids. Furthermore, we can play all sorts of play without worry of getting sick. Last but not the least, brighter and longer days allow people more active lifestyle so people like the hot climate.
On the other hade, cold weather allows people to have comfy and cozy lifestyle. For example, everyone loves to cuddle in the hot blanket in cold days. Cold weather places such as Russia, Canada have snow most of time and it is the best time to enjoy the skiing. We also have the winter Olympic where there are number of games which can be enjoyed in cold weather. In addition, some people also like the cold climate because they like to spend more time in- house with friends and families instead of going out.
In conclusion, we can enjoy both, hot and cold climate but I love the hot climate which allows me to more active and outgoing lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...th and surfing. Moreover, it is easy to adopt to active life style in warm weather where...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51449275362 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18438299996 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528985507246 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3311653557 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337869082711 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118550370249 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100231019574 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250227517519 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132785744247 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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