Essay topics: You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say
– Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute.
– What problems have you encountered with parking?
– What are your recommendations to solve them?
Dear Sir or Madam,
Because this city is more and more crowded recently, more and more cars are in the roads. It become impossible to reach my office under than half an hour. So I am wondering why bother riding car? I can use bicycle, this can also be seen as an excise. So I started commuting to work using bike.
But this also troubles me a little, because your building seems not very friendly to biker. You see, there are no signs or whatsoever to mark the parking lot for bicycle, I could not find a parking place in my first day of riding, it spent me ten minutes in vain, so I have to bring my bike to my office. I'm wondering if there is a parking place for bicycle? And if yes, could you mark the entrance more clearly?
As economic developing, there will be more traffic jam, and people are more than willing to use bicycle as a mean to commute, this can save more time and more environment friendly. So it becomes crucial to have a good infrastructure supporting green traffic. I recommend you consider build a bicycle park if there is none, also give prompt to show where to enter and where to exit. This can help a lots.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Chen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...more and more cars are in the roads. It become impossible to reach my office under tha...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o I have to bring my bike to my office. Im wondering if there is a parking place f...
^^
Line 7, column 397, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
... enter and where to exit. This can help a lots. Yours sincerely, Jack Chen
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36529680365 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36840648178 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598173515982 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7402493414 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179489690388 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653634057527 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842596619099 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121872901385 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042551897239 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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