Essay topics: You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Hi, Bill,
How are you? After I came back to my home, I keep recalling the time I spent with you, what a lovely week! We talked about our dreams, thanks for your hostpitality. I already looking forward to spent another week with you.
However, I had an important thing to told you: I could not found my wallet after I came back, I searched everywhere in my coat, cloth etc. I think I lost it in your house. I tried to remember where I left, it occured to me, maybe it’s in your balcony where we had a glass of wine together.
Could you do me a favor: check your balcony, or anywhere possible for me to left in your home, and send me through post, you can post it to address No 145 in Grand Road.
Thank you very much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, may, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 593.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17605633803 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23674432902 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683098591549 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9477135011 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.125 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413899788923 0.216113520407 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184787330162 0.0766984524023 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544319949466 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259927347907 0.12726935374 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621001388657 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 7.59969072165 79% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 41.2886597938 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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