Getting to eat 'ready to eat foods' such as junk foods like pizza, burgers, ham etc and 'easy to cook foods' like noodles and other frozen foods have obviously brought tremendous influence in people's everyday lives. With the advent of modern science and technology, lives have been much easier and improved as compared to past centuries. However, these changes upholds some major disadvantages as well. Various issues regarding health and economy are delved because of this breakthrough.
First, people are being more relied in ready-made foods that they have started being logy when it comes to cooking. They are more prone to eat junk foods than homemade foods. Basically, the young people detest home cooked foods. Although, these are easy to cook, people have built up negative habits of being coach potato and putting on weight. In the same way, they waste money for such foods which taste good but have no nutritional value. So, easier lives have their drawback.
Second, when we go through the ingredients of such foods, we can notice the use of different preservatives and flavouring chemicals which are malevolent to human health. Several cases of food poisoning and severe health condition have been noted since last decade.
Third, such foods lag nutritional values due to which these foods are not worth eating. People keep on feeding on them but they pose no good impact on health. These are solely the way of wasting money and exacerbating health.
In some extent, lives have been improved as foods are easier to prepare. These have saved both time and money. These even possess taste value. But, there are some drawbacks which are to be taken in consideration so that, the improvement can be long run and can maintain gastronomy as well as health of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, third, well, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99663299663 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38826179415 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2205293633 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1052631579 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184377391852 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599320014622 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542156429065 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103372445735 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398236448736 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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