People opt to move to another country for a better career opportunity or quality of life. Most of the time, different country speaks different language; even English which is widely spoken is not an official language in many countries. Because of that, communication problem is inevitable and I strongly agree that it poses some frustrating problems in early years of immigration.
The very first problem people encounter when moving to a new country is socializing. It is hard to find a new friend in a country that most people only speak local language; nonetheless, there is a chance to meet an extrovert person who can slightly speak the common language and is willing to make a new friend. On the other hand, speaking in lingua franca that both party do not have good command of, would only allows unsophisticated communication without deep feeling expression. At the end, the immigrant has to learn the host language in order to communicate fluently in a long term.
Practical life is also affected by the lack of communicability. For example, people will find it inconvenient to order food in a restaurant especially when there is no photo book available; furthermore, the experience will be much worse when one need to order food via telephone. Even more, all regulation related matter such as driving license will be hard to get done, opening a bank account or applying for a credit card will also be troublesome.
In summary, there will be some initial problems that people will find when moving to a new country. Technology will be a very good friend at early stage; nonetheless, learning local language is necessary. After all, life is for learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, after all, as to, for example, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.975 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90776362274 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5940484661 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815209502636 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305200970448 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273682394025 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508186277643 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403909523157 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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