although more and more people are reading news on the internet, most people still prefer reading the news in a newspaper. What are your views?
Undoubtedly, internet has huge impact on the life of human beings. Nowadays, most of the people are relying on internet for reading various news but, however others are still depending upon the newspapers due to plethora of reasons.I shall shed light on both informational sources before reaching to my perspective.
To begin with, many persons use to internet for escalating their knowledge by reading headlines due to multifarious reasons.One of the primary reason is the fast service of internet as it provides news about the world in few seconds.Furthermore, it is easy and convenient source, for example, the civilization can read news anywhere at anytime as well as save the important news in phone memory. Last but not least, as compared to newspaper, the font size of news on internet could be adjusted according to reading habbits of readers.Hence, a number of mortals prefer technology for exploring themselves.
On the contrary, other well beings show their interest in newspapers because it is cheaper service .Moreover, some of the oldest do not know about the working and functions of internet, therefore they believe that newsletters are easy to approach. An example from my personal perspective , my grandfather usually use to read newspaper to know about world happenings as he is illiterate about technology.Additionally, the valuable news may be highlighted on paper and even be taken out for keeping it in personal diary. As a result, the public when feel the need to refresh news , they can go through their secret diary.
To conclude, it is own wish of anyone whether they have to reach internet or scandal sheet for reading news.Although, most of the people are using internet they must remember the importance of newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19683691291 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.615113868 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.0 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.625 7.06120827912 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296402742818 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126804016935 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836050395023 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194107913115 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686493927235 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.