Reply to the customer with providing him information about a type of washing machine:
• the model
• the special functions
• the promotion program
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in response to the email from your side asking for technical information on the washing machine.
The washing machine is a Korean brand and has service centres across India. The model number is XFG-456, it is a fully automatic and there are a multitude of functions which it can do. Some special functions include automatic drying, alarm for water levels and a special washing feature which protects your fabric called an aqua wash. it comes in two variants one with 10 kg capacity and another one with a 20 Kg capacity. The washing machine also comes with a 5 years motor warranty and has a special cover to protect it from water and dust. Apart from this, it is the bestselling product in India.
At the moment if you are planning to buy this particular type then as a year-end sale we are offering a flat 30% discount.
I looking forward to clarifications if you have any.
Yours faithfully
Vinshu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-12-14 | vinshu koul | 73 | view |
| 2018-07-08 | hoanghadhtm | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns if you have any. Yours faithfully Vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68823529412 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5180662103 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652941176471 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8516023657 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4545454545 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19751209917 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056328628474 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053297102674 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806985426522 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712806359741 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.