TPO 47
The passage states that pterosaurs, an ancient group of reptiles, were not capable of powered flight. However, the lecturer holds an opposite view.
Firstly, the passage points out that pterosaurs are very likely cold-blooded, and cold-blooded animals are normally unable to produce enough energy for powered flight. However, in the lecture, the professor argues that there were heavy hair and fur over pterosaurs, which made them like warm-blooded animals. Therefore, there is a large possibility that pterosaurs have substantial energy for powered flight unlike other normal cold-blooded animals.
Secondly, the lecturer claims that although pterosaurs is extremely large, its weight is not so heavy to the extent to which it cannot make powered flight. Pterosaurs' bones are hallow instead of solid, and this decline the weight, which made them light enough to make powered flight.
Thirdly, the passage holds that all animals with powered flight must have the capability of taking off the ground, but pterosaurs did not have powerful muscles in their back legs to finish this action. The lecturer points out the differences between birds and pterosaurs. While birds can only use two limbs to launch, pterosaurs can use four limbs to launch. In other words. they could not just use their back legs to push off from the ground, so it is okay although they didn't have strong muscles in back legs.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'hallowed'.
Suggestion: hallowed
...ke powered flight. Pterosaurs bones are hallow instead of solid, and this decline the ...
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Line 7, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e four limbs to launch. In other words. they could not just use their back legs to p...
^^^^
Line 7, column 474, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...the ground, so it is okay although they didnt have strong muscles in back legs.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24888888889 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50811620815 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551111111111 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.305999216 49.2860985944 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476213654169 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153935212452 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108487544086 0.0662205650399 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255614284173 0.162205337803 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770721689817 0.0443174109184 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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