Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the
recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The Humanity had experienced numerous changes throughout its evolution. Every change had finally lead us to reach our current position. All these changes were driven by or even ignited by scientists representing the zeitgeist of their period. A scientist is a human who destined to dedicate all his resources to science and knowledge. But every scientist is a human in the firsts place, every human is responsible for taking humanity to a better and happier world every day. So all the scientists should indulge their resources to make this world a better place to live in.
Given view represents the idea that scientists and researchers should focus their researches on areas that likely benefit greatest number of people. This statement clearly mentions the author's inclination towards using science for a greater good. Science is fullest expression of knowledge explored by humanity. The whole essence of science is to study the world and nature around us, to use this knowledge in expanding the living experience of humans.
Further, scientists are the people who might be opposed at first, for their works being out of time, yet they are the ones who bring enlightenment to humanity. These greatest minds should spend their efforts and time on the areas that benefit greatest number of people possible. If these resources are wasted on something that is merely useful to current society, it might stand as a greatest work for future, but it can't make an unhappy face smile, or a hungry belly filled. A cloud raining in a dessert might have fulfilled its purpose of raining, but in vain. All the rain goes waste in the sands of an empty, isolated desert which supports no life. If that cloud had rained on a farmer's farm who is desperately waiting for rain, one could have seen one of the happiest face on this planet.
Moreover, scientists and researchers may have ideas which change the world at a snap but lack of resources stop them from bringing those ideas to life. These are the most common scenarios found in scientific community, yet most of the researchers try to put their efforts on developing the theoretical work of their ideas in a hope that they can be used in some future when the resources and technology compatible to handle those ideas would be available. But imagine a person dying of hunger and a scientist has a best idea on how to make a perfectly comfortable bed and pillow which never irritates or disturbs the sleep. If this scientist goes on to build the bed anticipating that the person needs to sleep further and gives him/her the bed, hungry person can never be satisfied with the comfort it provides. The immediate solution the person wants is some food which satisfies his present need but not some excellent invention which might solve the future problem that he/she might face.
Finally, every scientist is a human at the first place and should strive for betterment of humanity in the with greatest possible population being hepled.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
...its evolution. Every change had finally lead us to reach our current position. All t...
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Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'benefit the greatest'.
Suggestion: benefit the greatest
...s their researches on areas that likely benefit greatest number of people. This statement clearl...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...le. This statement clearly mentions the authors inclination towards using science for a...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the fullest'.
Suggestion: is the fullest
...ing science for a greater good. Science is fullest expression of knowledge explored by hum...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'benefit the greatest'.
Suggestion: benefit the greatest
...heir efforts and time on the areas that benefit greatest number of people possible. If these res...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...l to current society, it might stand as a greatest work for future, but it cant m...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d as a greatest work for future, but it cant make an unhappy face smile, or a hungry...
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Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...d as a greatest work for future, but it cant make an unhappy face smile, or a hungry...
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Line 7, column 514, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...son dying of hunger and a scientist has a best idea on how to make a perfectly co...
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Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the greatest'.
Suggestion: with the greatest
...trive for betterment of humanity in the with greatest possible population being hepled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91881188119 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57621707589 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50297029703 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.866398088 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.909090909 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9545454545 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22727272727 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193465668066 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592259626763 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880879089851 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108419079685 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411354662396 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.