It is believed by some people that a huge amount of money is better to be spent on constructing some art places including, theaters and art galleries or sport stadiums. In contrast, the rest of people strongly reckon, government should spend more money on the items which seem more critical like, medical care and education. In this essay, I will discuss both views.
On the one hand, people who have a knack for art, like going to cinemas or people who are interested in different sports such as, football and so forth so on, are in favor of spending more money on building theaters or sport stadiums. In their point of view, these kinds of actions must be taken because artists and athletes are the honour of society and the reputation of countries are dependent on them. For example, in sport field, Iran is known for the best wrestlers and everybody knows Mr Takhti as a well_known wrestler in the world. In addition, people who can afford the expenses of going to theaters or sport stadium are deserved to benefit these recreational facilities because of paying more money to government as a tax. This is why a big money must go to art and sports.
On the other hand, there are some people who strongly believe, government should benefit more people by paying more attention to the health and educational matters. As a matter of fact, they must be considered as the most crucial because they are related to body health or being literate which are going to play a vital role in society. As an example, for having a perfect job in future you not only must be healthy enough but also well_knowledge. In addition, these days we are witnessing a lot of people are in danger of death because of not being able to afford the expensive expenses of treatment. For example, most drugs which are crucial for treating cancer diseases are out of insurance. So, more money should be devoted to healthcare rather than anything else.
In conclusion, a group of people worry about spending budget on building galleries or sport stadium while others are against and utter medical cares are more important. Based on the above mentioned points, in my perspective, more amount of attention and budget should be paid for educational and healthcare because it going to cover the benefits of a big percentage of people. However, it does not mean that art and sport must be neglected. To tell the truth, for having the best country the spiritual needs of people must be considered as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73842592593 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5661755566 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483796296296 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2642425976 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.722222222 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321660061339 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101544337203 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100309281998 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220555145043 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750392107587 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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