Mankind depend on each other and live in the form of society since the inception of time. However, whether the modern world makes people more dependent or independent is a debated issue. Some feel that today's advances world is making individuals more reliant on others while others assume the opposite. Both sides of this will be analysed and a reasoned conclusion will be drawn in this essay.
There are reasons why people are becoming more dependent on others as some think. One of the obvious reasons is people are being much occupied with their work life so much so that it is not allowing them to carry out other necessary duties, for instance, cooking for meals. As a result they depend on their parents and workers to do this job. Moreover, the increasing number of daycare and babysitting activities clearly show the dependency of individuals on one another in this modern era. Thus, it is understandable why some people lean towards this point of view.
Nevertheless, there are arguments in favor of the opposite view which suggest mankind is being more independent. One clear point some makes regarding this is the decreasing number of joint families in many societies around the globe. Modern couples are choosing to live live separately from their parent unlike earlier generations. Moreover, increasing number of students now prefer studying in other cities and countries away from hometown as well as parents. These make clear mankind is being more independent.
In conclusion, although certain situations require people to rely on others, in general, mankind is being more independent in this era. This can be seen by the fall in the number of combined families. Also, availability of online jobs, financial growth made people more independent. Impact of this trend will require more time to be analysed.
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Please explain - ''More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted''
What are Relative clauses?
What are Relative clauses?
What are Relative clauses?
Relative clauses are clauses starting with the relative pronouns who*, that, which, whose, where, when. They are most often used to define or identify the noun that precedes them. Here are some examples:
Do you know the girl who started in grade 7 last week?
Can I have the pencil that I gave you this morning?
A notebook is a computer which can be carried around.
I won't eat in a restaurant whose cooks smoke.
I want to live in a place where there is lots to do.
Yesterday was a day when everything went wrong!
* There is a relative pronoun whom, which can be used as the object of the relative clause. For example: My science teacher is a person whom I like very much. To many people the word whom now sounds old-fashioned, and it is rarely used in spoken English.
Relative pronouns are associated as follows with their preceding noun:
Preceding noun Relative pronoun Examples
a person who(m)/that, whose - Do you know the girl who ..
- He was a man that ..
- An orphan is a child whose parents ..
a thing which†/that, whose - Do you have a computer which ..
- The oak a tree that ..
- This is a book whose author ..
Note 1: The relative pronoun whose is used in place of the possessive pronoun. It must be followed by a noun. Example: There's a boy in grade 8 whose father is a professional tennis player. (There's a boy in grade 8. His father is a professional tennis player.)
Note 2: The relative pronouns where and when are used with place and time nouns. Examples: FIS is a school where children from more than 50 countries are educated. 2001 was the year when terrorists attacked the Twin Towers in New York.
Some relative clauses are not used to define or identify the preceding noun but to give extra information about it. Here are some examples:
My ESL teacher, who came to Germany in 1986, likes to ride his mountain bike.
The heavy rain, which was unusual for the time of year, destroyed most of the plants in my garden.
Einstein, who was born in Germany, is famous for his theory of relativity.
The boy, whose parents both work as teachers at the school, started a fire in the classroom.
My mother's company, which makes mobile phones, is moving soon from Frankfurt to London.
In the summer I'm going to visit Italy, where my brother lives.
Nominalization itself is an
Nominalization itself is an example of a nominalization, but more common examples are words like evaporation, condensation, mechanization, and optimization. As you have probably noticed, they often end in –ation/-tion/-ition. These are the types of words often used in science or in highly specialized fields, and they make it easier for us to talk about our fields of expertise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'depends'.
Suggestion: depends
Mankind depend on each other and live in the form of s...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: live
...e globe. Modern couples are choosing to live live separately from their parent unlike ear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64325346664 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3696769167 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325496529417 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112705274355 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110718198742 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200997292791 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670261988528 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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