Nowadays, technological advancement took us a long way, made our life simpler than before and affected all aspects of personal and social life. some people belives that the technology helped in socialising a lot but some others argues that it failed in these aspects.
Modern era witnessed, a lot of innovations in technology and communication which helped the people in enormous ways. People finds it is easy to communicate with others as the new inventions made it possible to talk and live chat with people from all over the world. It reduced the distance between people and keep in touch and can boost the socialising. The world can understand what happens around them in their and other societies by means of news and Internet. Transportation facilities advanced exponentially in last decades, helped people to travel all over the world quickly and meet their loved ones and other relations. Besides, social media developed to it's peak, allows people to chat and share their ideas, get informations, keep in touch with friends and make new friends.
On the otherhand, these technologies shows some disadvantages as well, people often addicted to social media and not finding time to socialise in real life. Most of them using social media and their actual charecter is masked behind and appears to be attractive among the public. Recreational activities reduced dramatically as the people busy with life it can affect badly in the effort of socialising. Group sports and other activities was one of the most important aspects of socialising which reduced because of the influence of Internet games. Modern flat life, even though give an opportunity for socialising with community but rarely people finds time as they have busy schedules.
From my point people should find time in keeping connection with the society which can be beneficial in number of ways. Modern technologies are not only the means of communication, but also we can use the conventional methods like family meets and social programmes.
Overall, people should choose technology wisely to make benefit for them and society. Society is the important element of the human life, thus it shold be considered and given priority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15642458101 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7976892827 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.1412093663 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.588235294 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216935206996 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771153005339 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531281540038 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124957088138 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035184920815 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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