The charts illustrate in comparison of expenditure between The Great Britain and America.
The pie charts illustrate the cost of living compared between The Great Britain and America in 6 different categories.
Overall, people in the UK spend more on rent than the other categories, while spending on food accounts for the largest proportion of living cost in the US. By contrast, both nations pay the least amount of money on buying DVDs.
The percentage of spending on rent in the UK and America is 30% and 20% respectively. Moreover, American consumes food with exactly one-fourth of their expenditure whereas this figure for food in the UK is 7% lowers. Only 12% of the cost of
living in the UK is spent on books and the figure for America is slightly higher with 15%.
Both American and British spend just one-tenth of their living cost for DVDs. Besides, the small amount of expenditures is spent equally on going out and transport in two nations with 15% each.
- Some people think that the development of technology help decrease crime and other people think that would encourage crime Discuss both views and give your opinion 80
- The graph below shows the consumption of fast food in the U K per week from 1970 to 1990 73
- the charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age group and the amount of support that receive from employers. 67
- The pie charts illustrate the cost of living's comparison between the great Britain and America. 61
- The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in 1980 and 1990 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...UK is 7% lowers. Only 12% of the cost of living in the UK is spent on books and t...
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Line 8, column 138, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...amount of expenditures is spent equally on going out and transport in two nations with 1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77922077922 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55811191759 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2136607852 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167887234534 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104245625566 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155582233049 0.0843802449381 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122485206505 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165497430953 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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