You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that i moved to my own house. As you visited my last house and saw how congested it was. we were just fed up of the society and the area and at the same time we are thinking of the family planning so before going ahead want everything to be in place.
The new house is quite good, windy and bright. I made some changes according to my taste and likes. it has three bedrooms, kitchen, three restrooms and five balconies. I am sure you will like the place and design as well as i had really invested my time in it. Why don't you pay us a visit this weekend and see the place and will have some gossips as it's been so long since we met. I will prepare your favourite chinese cuisine for lunch.
I will be waiting for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Nisha Bhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sam, I am writing this letter to let you know...
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...riting this letter to let you know that i moved to my own house. As you visited m...
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...ast house and saw how congested it was. we were just fed up of the society and the...
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...g ahead want everything to be in place. The new house is quite good, windy and b...
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...hanges according to my taste and likes. it has three bedrooms, kitchen, three rest...
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...ll like the place and design as well as i had really invested my time in it. Why ...
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... had really invested my time in it. Why dont you pay us a visit this weekend and see...
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...ur favourite chinese cuisine for lunch. I will be waiting for your reply. You...
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... I will be waiting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
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...ting for your reply. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
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... reply. Yours sincerely, Nisha Bhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14465408805 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07514767816 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6009934808 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9090909091 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200849626087 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698589796985 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056158452467 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115310478368 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330392342579 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.