Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence in young adults.
You meet a lot of people during your life and you learn a variety of things like their ideas and opinion. This begins from the first moment you were born and it lasts until the very ending seconds of your journey in this world. However, some of those people have make more influence on you than others. I believe that friends and families can have equal impression on somebody because of the reasons I discuss below.
Personally, when a child comes to this life its parents are the very first individuals that he or she meets. Parents provide the baby child with its basic needs and the baby starts to learn the first rules in this world from them. So, an infant is so much affected by its family.
As the child grows and begins to understand more perspectives from its surrounding environment, the child feels the need to be connected to other people and this matter is being intensified when he or she reaches its school time where it should learn more about social communities which increase its friends share of influence in a young adult.
On the other hand, when this person got to its adulthood beginning something around the age of 16 to 18, this person feels a necessity to find a balance between its parents and friends to cope with the situations he or she confronts in every day ordinary life. Therefore, it is the person’s responsibility to know what is beneficial for him or her to learn from them.
In conclusion, a human can experience different affections during its long life in this planet. Sometimes these effects could be from his or her own parents and in some other cases it may affect him or her from his or her friends’ side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...with the situations he or she confronts in every day ordinary life. Therefore, it is the per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 22.412803532 223% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63973063973 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52155059744 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 145.348785872 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2280025552 49.2860985944 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06452816374 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976944416759 0.272083759551 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371829343044 0.0996497079465 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488167008749 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0562935866107 0.162205337803 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443812876352 0.0443174109184 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 53.8541721854 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.2367328918 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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