You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
explain where you live
describe the problem
give reasons why you do not want this development
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. This is to inform, a proposal is currently under consideration to expand the airport. There would be few issues that would be caused by expansion of airport. This will cause more noise pollution and severe stress for local population.
Let me explain you in detail, as government plans to increase revenues by expanding airport premises. This will increase inflow and outflow of flights. Increase in number of flights will cause more traffic and noise problems. Moreover, this will also lead to a security issue for local population and airport itself.
Therefore, we will like to request government to reconsider it's proposal and adjust accordingly, so that local population doesn't suffer and other factors are also kept under consideration.
Regards
Yours Sincerely
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...n and airport itself. Therefore, we will like to request government to reconside...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t accordingly, so that local population doesnt suffer and other factors are also kept ...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s Yours Sincerely Ahmed Ali Arbani
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 135.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37777777778 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70746567298 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674074074074 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5906724481 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204109501707 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078110330085 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485858201859 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115435883306 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650652353963 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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