Write a letter to a television company congratulating them on a TV programme that you have recently seen.
Write a letter to the television company. In your letter
• mention when and why you watched it
• say why you liked it so much
• what effect it might have on other people
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter as a congratulating gesture for the success of your now-very-popular TV programme.
Recently, I went to my brother's house in Brooklyn. His nine-year-old son is highly fond of watching educational television channels like Discovery channel. He compelled me to spend some time with him watching "How it's Made", a programme produced by your company. I must say that I was really driven away by the details which I came across in that day's episode about the manufacturing of popular eatable produce from Fritolay, called Lays. I and my nephew got to know everything about the production of this product ranging from the collection and storage of potatoes, needed to make the chips, to the packaging and transportation of the chips.
Moving further, there is no denying that this show can put a very positive impact on those who watch it. This is because, one, they become knowledgeable about the background of products unveiled in the episodes to them, and two, it develops their mindset about the products as after the insider insights, people would definitely have a clearer viewpoint about them. Therefore, without any doubt, I would always recommend everybody, regardless of age, to witness the beauty of this show.
I hope that you and your company continues to create such wonderful programmes and enjoy unparalleled success.
Yours sincerely
Darpan Aneja
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...the details which I came across in that days episode about the manufacturing of popu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22807017544 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98391347264 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710526315789 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.546511619 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155586139106 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507422034342 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527434976183 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104091906008 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527597648115 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.