Nowadays parents are sending their children to trips abroad for educational purposes.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
International exposure of education has become a very common thing in this contemporary time period as there is competition everywhere due to which a large amount of pupils are visiting abroad. However, there are various merits and demerits of travelling abroad on which I will shed light in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with its merits, international education is advanced and practical based than many other nations as a result it enhances the level of learners and provides better education. For example, students gets the individual attention in modern classrooms and most of their study is go through practical based assignments and projects that build interest in learners. Similarly foreign student will have more chances of Jobs as they have obtained high value education from foreign countries that will help them to get well paid Jobs easily everywhere even in their own country. Moreover,By studying in another country, students will get chance to know another cultures, people and they will learn rules and regulations by studying overseas. It build their confidence as well as communication skill would be improved. Most importantly, they will learn how to tackle difficulties alone which will help learners to become self dependent.
On the other hand there are some negative impacts as well of study abroad that cannot be ignored. First of all, international education is an expensive thing that common people cannot afford easily for example air fare, acommodation, feeses and food will consume alot of money. Unfortunatily, if any student remains unable to finish education with good marks then it would be total wastage of money. Furthermore, for female learners it is more difficult to survive themselves as they can face abusive or sexual harrasment as they live thousand miles away from their family. Living by themselves could create a huge problem for them as they can not do heavy works for long time period. Not only living but some sickness also create a problem for them as girls are mostly attached with their mothers.
Hence, it can be concluded that international education is a better option for those who have money, confidence amd determination in order to achieve success in life. However, they have to be prepared for their own safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20652173913 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76570101048 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1885166078 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143936287816 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518984013462 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274626866274 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959181867196 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220209016814 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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