The graph below shows the number of vehicles owned by per thousand people in China from 1987 to 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This bar chart gives data on how many Chinese people possess vehicles between 1987 and 1999. It is apparently seen that more and more people were heavily relying on means of transportation over a 12 – year period.
Now, turning to the details, the number of cars per thousand people stood at around 300 vehicles in 1987. This figure almost doubled by late eighties to reach just above 500 vehicles. China continued to see a steady rise during the next 4 years which amounted to 1000 vehicles per thousand people
During the second half of nineties, the rate of increase in vehicle ownership skyrocketed. To begin with, around 2000 vehicles were registered by a thousand Chinese individuals in 1995. This figure went up by 50% in 1997 to 3000 vehicles. After that, an amount of vehicles per thousand jumped to 4100 by the end of the given period. Furthermore, it is interesting to note that the figure of 1999 was double that of 1995 and 13 times more than 1987’s.
- The graph below shows the number of vehicles owned by per thousand people in China from 1987 to 1999.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph below shows the number of vehicles owned by per thousand people in China from 1987 to 1999 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 69
- The graph below shows the number of vehicles owned by per thousand people in China from 1987 to 1999.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The table below shows the estimated oil capacity of six countries, in millions of barrels per day, from 1990 to 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, second, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54338819872 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9688150042 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206017527179 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804847314829 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645283248005 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141095069646 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439301929628 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.