One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn’t attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
– explain why you missed it
– explain why you didn’t tell your friend
– and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry
Dear Mathew,
hope you are doing well. First of all, I would like to wish you a belated happy birthday and would like to apologize for missing your birthday bash this year.
Actually, I had such a busy schedule last week due to an ongoing project for which I had to urgently travel to China and hence was not able to make it to your birthday party. I wanted to intimate you of this sudden engagement but as you know sometimes you are so much occupied with work that you forget your personal commitments.
I hope you would accept my apology and to make up for this I would like to invite you to a party which I would be hosting. How does Sunday this week sound?. I promise you that you will enjoy as I would also be inviting our college friends. It would also be a great opportunity to meet old friends
I look forward to seeing you soon
Warm wishes
Mike
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mathew, hope you are doing well. First of all, I...
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Line 4, column 238, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'know'.
Suggestion: sometimes know
...ou of this sudden engagement but as you know sometimes you are so much occupied with work that...
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Line 4, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t you forget your personal commitments. I hope you would accept my apology and t...
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Line 6, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a great opportunity to meet old friends I look forward to seeing you soon Warm...
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Line 8, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s I look forward to seeing you soon Warm wishes Mike
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to seeing you soon Warm wishes Mike
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, look, so, well, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29268292683 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22309413459 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9633649257 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329456732724 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144054063563 0.0766984524023 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857954397125 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208400130171 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598087011937 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.