It is an obvious truth that getting a suitable job for people specially youth, is extremely cumbersome these days. The causes of that is rooted in several components that will be discussed in this essay.
First and foremost reason is related to the economy. we are witnessing people are dealing with tough circumstances that make it difficult to continue their working as a staff. For instance, nowadays a huge amount of companies are firing out employees because of not being able to give their wages. So people are have to do some temporary jobs far making lives.
Another point that has an important effect on finding permanent jobs is due to skills and knowledge. Some people are suffering from unemployment because of lack of related and practical skills which are rather essential in order to be employed. Unfortunately, our universities do not make the pupils ready in doing practical things and when young people who have no experience, start their working, face with inevitable problems that make continuing job hard for them. That is why that finding a job is becoming hard.
Actually, there are a lot items that must be considered in order to tackle this controversial issue. Firstly, our education and government should take care about the curriculum of studying that is going to make students ready for finding a perfect job. Secondly, employers must satisfy the staffs with a fulfilling salary that can create more motivation in order to have a permanent job.
In conclusion, based on the above mentioned points, finding a permanent job is getting difficult and for addressing this issue, financial and educational system must take care about their duties in connected with providing better salary and education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...emost reason is related to the economy. we are witnessing people are dealing with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12323943662 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7461425399 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3363169922 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161381388681 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605456239947 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409758637159 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900937338141 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301556931853 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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