the internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solution can you suggest?
Nowadays, there is a rise in demand for cybersecurity. This suggests that the electronic and automatic information are vulnerable to the informational thief, or we can say hackers. It is apparent that the number of hacking and stolen electronic information increase a phenomenon concern for online users which wasn't recognised before. With the easy accessibility of the internet and network, it leads an advantage to people who have highly educated about Technology and want to use it for a lousy manner. For instances, the firewall to be one of the most well-developed tools to secure the user's private information. It is no more the case these days. Despite the amount of research and development in cybersecurity, cyber thefts and cyber threats are existing and abusing human security every day. To reduce this, the presence of well-qualified ITs specialise in this aspect and the awareness of online safety, need well-spreading and educated. As a result, people will be more careful and used to protectionism when their information being abused or stolen.
The consumption of the internet regards as technological innovation. In another words, the creative destruction has well described this trend. Since its' functions are family-friendly and have high reliability. E.g., the efficiency is not deniable and less time-consuming. The number of people accesses to the internet will predict to jump dramatically. Statistical speaking, over two decades, the demand for accessibility become a new social norm and necessity to the whole population. Therefore, the causality following this trend is unstoppable. I would make a point that the resolution for this surrealness is improving the morality of users; restricted the accessibility to the dark web or unidentical website and is impossible to trace back to the roots.
All the problems above only occur in the past few years and bringing an unpredictable future to millions of networks. Realistic speaking, in 2016, the anonymous group of hackers who legally published the covert documentation about the US government is an obvious threat to our primary users. Hence, government intervention may need to involve to this free market competition, such as a higher tax rate on households who relied on income from online security to increase the barriers to entry. Also, the synergies between network-based security companies need to be more reachable to a wider range of customers who acquired better online safety.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...enomenon concern for online users which wasnt recognised before. With the easy access...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37371134021 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23185908033 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5065904131 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928392275609 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255048805319 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338594681366 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546965977071 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279606319766 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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